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Medical Forum / General / General / May 2005~ * A Dark Morning Wood Sign ...
~ * ~ _________________________________________ ~ * ~ A Sign, A Boarded Shingle Hung Out TO Dry ~ * ~ ! * ! The Faithful Meade Lens Reminder ~ ! _________________________________________ ~ * Polish Your Telescope Lens, Play Couperin or Telemann & Don't Forget ... "One must be serious About someone, if one wants enduring Sensuous amusement And true sacred amour in life." ~ Oscar Whining Childe "... and don't forget To stock the Armoire with sparkling Spirits, And check back later ~ !" ~ Gertrude Stole Alice ~ * ~ ~ ~ _________________________________________ Yes ~ A Morning Wood Roadside Semi ~ OTIC _________________________________________ * Dogging Arts * Fogging Minds * It's a Star * _________________________________________ ~ * ~ * * ~ Blog, or dog? Who knows. But if you see my lost pup, please bring him home! I got Leon a brand-new bone. _________________ http://journals.aol.com/virginiaz/DreamingofLeonardo ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ "ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ" ~ Tdot "... alas, Not me, for Hell wracks my soul, 'til Justice found, dewly mine, or foul Unfeathered world, this." ~ Twittering > tdotdbotare@hotmail.com wrote... > > [quoted text clipped - 8 lines] > Unfeathered world, this." > ~ Twittering BANG ! 'Tis a sleeping reader, But a reader nonetheless, To wake the snore, To reach the core, And further happiness... Get a louder bang? Poets are, by long, by far, The unsung raisers of the bar. Paine "BANG ! 'Tis a sleeping reader, But a reader nonetheless, To wake the snore, To reach the core, And further happiness... Get a louder bang? Poets are, by long, by far, The unsung raisers of the bar." ~ Paine "... and a fine Poet, Paine, you are ~ !" ~ Twittering "But, O, Our words, our logos Know not robust punch or zestful Jest, for longer pain we bear, our broken Core, snapped, undone, for longing Too long alone, writing words unspoken, Broken twice, no minor love token." ~ Folly "Soul, Broken twice, no minor Love token. But not for nothing, Our wanting, for our broken mind spoke, If broke us." ~ Twittering > Painius suggested... > [quoted text clipped - 15 lines] > Poet, Paine, you are ~ !" > ~ Twittering Oh! Burning Sun of PAINful Fun, it Doth take one to know one. > "But, O, > Our words, our logos [quoted text clipped - 4 lines] > Broken twice, no minor love token." > ~ Folly 'Tis Wise to be Folly !  Signaturehappy days and... starry starry nights! Paine "Soul, Broken twice, no minor Love token. But not for nothing, Our breaking, for our spoken mind speaks truth, Even if no one hears or cares For what we say." ~ Twittering "For, if they did, They'd change the world, and tell us so. 'cause hell we been through more than twice ~ No need for any more. No need for anyone else to be ignored." ~ Folly "Oh! Burning Sun Of PAINful Fun, It Doth take one To know one." ~ Paine "Fun ~ ? O, Paine, please explain." ~ Folly "Something >From another land ~ ?" ~ Twittering "Your shriek, your holler, Of pain not hollered loud enough For BANG! Try again." ~ White Chalk > "Oh! Burning Sun > Of PAINful Fun, [quoted text clipped - 5 lines] > O, Paine, please explain." > ~ Folly I find poetry, if written and read well, to be oxymoronic. Like Uncle Will's "Parting is such 'sweet sorrow'". Poets are both serious... and playful... so a good poet such as yourself will mix it up and render "painful fun" to readers. Note that this does not "water down" the poems at all, except in the most narrow-minded. Indeed, this practice will give poetry the full strength of both ideas... ...truly AGONIZING pain coupled with childlike, giggling and PLAYFUL fun! This yields a "bigger bang" than even the one which created us all. And will expand minds faster than any mere universe! > "Something > >From another land ~ ?" [quoted text clipped - 6 lines] > Try again." > ~ White Chalk a BANG! so big? or a bang so small, again and again we rise to fall, i stare at the stars, at a sky so tall, to hear the loudest silence of all. happy days and... starry starry nights! Indelibly yours, Paine |
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