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OTP - i haven't done this in awhile---a poem

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d'huit - 07 Jan 2005 06:38 GMT
i hope it's ok to post this.  there are thousands of these kinds of poems
written now.  we poets cannot help ourselves.  the images adhere to
everything vital that flows within us and must emerge again.  there's no
escaping it, as much as i'd like to, at times.  and so, there are thousands
of poems like this one, and one more . . .

Untitled

December 26, 2003

No disaster movie ever filmed
the way he pins up the printout
of her image, and perhaps, almost
the image of their unborn child.

Firm, steady, push-pin and smoothing
flat-handedly across the page's edges--
his two fingers move to his lips and
to her paper lips . . . her paper lips.

Both hands, now, frame her paper
face.  Both hands, now, push back
against his body's desire to fall into
and lose itself in her forever smile.

Both hands, now, tremble
with his shoulders' quake
and wipe away tsunami tears
that betray his acceptance.
DCHAM - 07 Jan 2005 14:06 GMT
kate, that is achingly beautiful. i'm so glad you shared with us.

diane
d'huit - 07 Jan 2005 18:10 GMT
> kate, that is achingly beautiful. i'm so glad you shared with us.
>
> diane

thank you, diane.  i was so moved by the exquisite vignette of this man's
grief in a brief newsclip i'd seen only once.  i found my own shoulders
wracking with his and my own hands mirroring his at the end.  it so struck
me how his action, of pinning his pregnant wife's computer image to the
bulletin board of the missing, was less an act of hope and more an act of a
loving memorial.  it didn't seem possible to capture its exquisiteness in
language, but i simply was compelled to try.

kate
(what is it with me and dates?!  why can't my fingers remember the year i'm
living in?!  i keep doing that.  bothers me.)
kenny - 07 Jan 2005 22:06 GMT
>> kate, that is achingly beautiful. i'm so glad you shared with us.
>>
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That's a beautiful poem Kate. I read it several times. My daughter,
who is 32, writes poetry all the time plus she's an English major in
college. Thank you Kate for a great poem.

~Kenny
d'huit - 09 Jan 2005 06:16 GMT
w0w, kenny, thank you.  that's quite a lovely thing for you to say and for
me to hear.

kate

>>> kate, that is achingly beautiful. i'm so glad you shared with us.
>>>
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>
> ~Kenny
 
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